S4 League: manga

[Zhuggolotto]

Hi everybody, I'm trying to realize an s4 manga with a good story line (not only fights °-°)
So far I've done the first 3 introduction pages (the manga won't so boring xD) and how you can see, I still have much to learn (for example, the "little naive face"'s t-shirt change from 2nd to 3rd page .-.)
I hope you like it.. >.< read it like a real manga, from right to the left

PREMISE: I'm italian, I've tried to translate (the original is in italian forum), so I need a real (uman) translater xD sorry for mistakes ç_ç

[ViciusTan]

Nice! :D

I hope you find a translator. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this. :D

[Audentia]

It's looking really good. Very manga-esque.

[HellaHell]

Really nice drawing style. Keep it up.

[enigma04]

Very nice ! Keep it up and good luck !

[DeathOracle]

hmm... can i help?

[DeathOracle]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pb0G0Qk1 ... r_embedded
translating all the words for the synopsis

[DeathOracle]

By the way i made a s4 manga group on facebook!!! here:
http://www.facebook.com/login/setashome ... 62252&ap=1

[DeathOracle]

plz add me on facebook cuz i really need some help on the story

[mayawooz]

beep u